Draft of Public Argument

This post will contain a link to the rough draft of my rhetorical argument and specific things I want my peers to look out for when reading my piece.

JasonParis, "Hespeler, ON."11/12/2011 via Flick. Attribution 2.0 Generic

Click here to access my rough draft of Project 3.

Dearest Peers,
Thanks in advance for reading my public argument. I just want to remind you that this rough draft is indeed rough. I mainly just want to know if my argument itself seems convincing- if the support I use seems effective and incorporated thoughtfully, also I would like to know if my blog post seems like something that would possibly be published. I welcome your insight and criticisms about my work, and hope you enjoy reading it!
Thanks!