Draft of Open Letter

This post will contain a link to the rough draft of my open letter and specific things I want my peers to look out for when reading my piece.

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 Click here to access the rough draft of my open letter.

Dear Peers,
Thanks in advance for taking the time to read the draft of my open letter. I want to make sure that I have covered enough topics in my letter, and seem to be following the correct conventions of a semi-formal letter. So if you could look out for these concerns of mine, in addition to other generic/grammatical changes that would be great.
Thanks!!