Copy of Paragraph 2 Analysis

In this, post I will provide a link to a new copy of Project 2, which I have performed a paragraph analysis on.

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Click here to access my paragraph analysis.

Reflection:

After performing a paragraph analysis on my most recent version of my rhetorical analysis draft, I have become a lot more confident in my essay as a whole. I feel as though my body paragraphs are definitely my strong suits. I feel as though my analysis of the text is organized in an effective manner and properly explains the rhetorical strategies that I chose to evaluate. However, despite the fact that this deadline forced me to rework and rewrite both my introduction and conclusion, I am still not totally confident in these aspects of my writing. My introduction makes me concerned because I don't know if my grabber is effective enough, and I am unsure if my conclusion properly circles back to my introduction and answers the right "so what" questions. Other than those concerns, I am quite content with my draft and am excited for the submission process next week.