Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

This post will provide a link to the rough draft of my rhetorical analysis.

Kevan, "Work in Progress." 10/8/2011 via Flickr. Attribution 2.0 Generic

Click here for the draft of my rhetorical Analysis.

Dear Peer Reviewers,

I would like to thank you in advance for taking the time to edit my rhetorical analysis. Before you start reading and editing my work I would just like to tell you my major concerns about my writing that I would like you to help me resolve.

-Please help my grammar!!
-I want your feedback about whether the structure and approach of my analysis seems effective?
-Did you like how I ordered my body paragraphs based on American values?
-Do I use too many quotes?

If you could just assess and help me improve those aspects of my writing that would help greatly.

Thanks!!